New Zealand
Navigating the rough water
Each and every new dawn
We hope to finally meet this luscious land
Zigzagging through all of the different regions
Engulfed in an array of colours
Awestruck because of it's beauty
Life afresh with a new hope
A fresh chance...a new beginning
Nurture balances with nature
Dreams become reality.
7 comments:
Kia Ora Harrison
I enjoyed reading youre poem. I like the bit when you said "Zigzagging through all of the different regions." I really visualized that bit. Keep up the great work my friend :)
Hello Jolie
Thankyou for all of your positive comments.
Hey Harrison
Your poem is really good. How did you come up with your ideas?
Great work :) ;)
Harrison,
What a fabulous poem! You have used such wonderful vocabulary to describe your experience... luscious, awestruck, engulfed... Awesome!
And yes, what a dream come true to be the first person to discover New Zealand!
Nice!
Nicky
Hello Vedel
Thank you for all of you positive comments. They have really made me think on how I can make my writing even better.
Hi Harrison
Your poem about being the first person to arrive at Shag point is great. I enjoyed every part of it. Keep up the good work.
Daniel
Hi Harrison,
Your poem was amazing! I loved the strong vocabulary that you had in there, I loved reading it, keep up the great work!
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