WALHT: show not tell emotions
The frowns were all over the foreheads of the Lions. They were covering the faces, barely making eye contact. All you could hear was complaining. Their heads were down. Spirits were damaged. How would they carry on? Some had regret, some had remorse. They stuck around even though they didn't want to. All they really wanted to do was scurry back to the locker room.
Smiles was burnt upon their faces. Long laughs were let out after what they had done. It made them feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Fists were flying up in the air. They had everything to gain and nothing to lose at this point. They had claimed their rightful place upon the mountain top. Nothing could stop them.
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