Monday, 1 January 2018

Summer Learning Journey Week 2 Day 4 Bonus Activity

One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you drop to floor. Fearing for your life. You aren't sure what has entirely happened but you do suspect that it was a torpedo from an enemy submarine. You fearfully get up to your feet and start walking around checking on the patients. Some of they want to get up and fight but they are far too weak to even walk. Let alone fight. You are trying you best to calm them all down. Then, bang. Another torpedo hits, this time it the boat shakes and you fall to the floor. Your passed out.


Nicky Bloy said...

Hey Harrison!

Great writing! The poor patients having to fight for their lives as well as being sick. My favourite part of your story is that you leave the reader in suspense at the end, anxious to know what happens after you pass out! I wonder what happens...

Keep it up, Harrison!

Nicky :)

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